I like the idea and the rationale booklet covers a lot of information about it, social issue is state clearly with some data which brings more awareness. Format of the rationale is good and the model looks good as well.
Suggestions maybe add in a basic instructions on how to use the product and also what is inside the kit may helps the users know what are in there and how it may be used in emergency situations.
It looks like a professional booklet which is good. Thats great! The idea is also interesting. It is good to see the model. It would be better to have more detail about your design process.
Cedric, what a fantastic rationale booklet! the colours and layout look really professional and the information is clear. The white drawings on a black background are really effective in communicating your concepts.
Although an unusual social issue, boat safety is extremely valid. I enjoyed reading how you propose to tack the issue and your out come is a really clever design; you considered all aspects.
The 3D rendered exploded view was very impressive to see and I am envious that you already have those skills and I do not.
Your model was also good, but had room from improvement in the finish.
Cedric, I am impressed by your layout and all those graphic design. The research is fully detailed that raised my awareness about the BOATING SAFETY. It's more like a story of how you research your work and get presented. I like the way how you scan your sketches and paint with white, which can easily identified as a industrial designer's work. I was wondering how did you draw the lid in 3D model.Nice to learn something from your professional work!
The social issue that you stated is different from others and impressive, and the design solution is creative. I like your rationale booklet, it looks very attractive and professional. And white sketches on the black background are very nice.
I like the idea and the rationale booklet covers a lot of information about it, social issue is state clearly with some data which brings more awareness. Format of the rationale is good and the model looks good as well.
ReplyDeleteSuggestions maybe add in a basic instructions on how to use the product and also what is inside the kit may helps the users know what are in there and how it may be used in emergency situations.
DeleteGreat job ! very nice model , rational shows very well researched and well designed
ReplyDeleteIt looks like a professional booklet which is good. Thats great! The idea is also interesting. It is good to see the model. It would be better to have more detail about your design process.
ReplyDeleteCedric, what a fantastic rationale booklet! the colours and layout look really professional and the information is clear. The white drawings on a black background are really effective in communicating your concepts.
ReplyDeleteAlthough an unusual social issue, boat safety is extremely valid. I enjoyed reading how you propose to tack the issue and your out come is a really clever design; you considered all aspects.
The 3D rendered exploded view was very impressive to see and I am envious that you already have those skills and I do not.
Your model was also good, but had room from improvement in the finish.
Cedric, I am impressed by your layout and all those graphic design. The research is fully detailed that raised my awareness about the BOATING SAFETY. It's more like a story of how you research your work and get presented. I like the way how you scan your sketches and paint with white, which can easily identified as a industrial designer's work. I was wondering how did you draw the lid in 3D model.Nice to learn something from your professional work!
ReplyDeleteBy the way, how did you publish the full image of rationale. I am so confuse about it
ReplyDeleteThe social issue that you stated is different from others and impressive, and the design solution is creative. I like your rationale booklet, it looks very attractive and professional. And white sketches on the black background are very nice.
ReplyDeleteIt is a good idea and impressive booklet. It contains many informatins and data. it is good and the model is also looks good as well.
ReplyDeleteSuggestion is it may be show some posters how to use the product with human inside. and what is the order of everything in this product.
Deleteit is a good product and address the social issue quite well. rational booklet is very strong part for your presetnation.
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